Like Hoops Of Steel Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Like Hoops Of Steel

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Life's journey! !
A mission on earth;
Like hoops of steel to loop a hole.

Minds! !
Mankind,
Thoughts!
Ideas all around the world;
To watch every step.

So, give your thoughts no tongue when i rhyme! !
Like, given incentives with a common sense;
All about life on earth.

A supplier's credit! !
A writer's view!
All men are shovels and, all women are spades;
To wit the will and to play a role! ! !
Spectic goals of a great concern.

My mind and tongue!
But, the pen is faster than my thoughts! !
Like the flow of an ink,
Unstoppable.

My mind that is! !
To your friends that are!
Souls on earth;
Poetry flows when my mind acts! ! !
As a reward to a free mind;
Oh life! ! !
Give me an opportunity to live.

Wednesday, December 31, 2025
Topic(s) of this poem: love of poetry,writing,free mind,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Minds on earth!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tamara Beryl Latham 31 December 2025

Enjoyable read, 'Men are shovels and women are spades' is an interesting line. Your poem forces the reader to contemplate every word. Nicely penned, . Thanks for haring.

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