Kumarmani Mahakul

Gold Star - 418,415 Points (Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA)

Limerick - 25 - Snake - Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Jack is clever and is too stupid
He often does jokes and works rapid
To Jill oneday in twilit
Threw a rope of three feet
She outcried 'snake' and jumped in flaccid.

Topic(s) of this poem: humour, snake

Form: Limerick


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  • Muzahidul RezaMuzahidul Reza (6/25/2018 4:56:00 PM)

    Your all Limerick poems are very interesting and sources of great laughter, thanks for sharing the poem with us,10 (Report)Reply

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  • Indira RenganathanIndira Renganathan (4/9/2018 12:46:00 AM)

    A common trick to frighten somebody playfully.... when used for a poem how wonderfully it
    comes out as a Limerick....beautiful craft....thank you Kumar
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  • Geetha JayakumarGeetha Jayakumar (4/3/2018 1:35:00 PM)

    Interesting limerick about prank. Loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. (Report)Reply

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  • Mihaela PirjolMihaela Pirjol (3/28/2018 3:11:00 AM)

    This limerick has been a pleasure to read: humorous, and filled with surprise. Beautifully composed. (Report)Reply

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  • Rose Marie Juan-austinRose Marie Juan-austin (3/27/2018 9:46:00 PM)

    Poor Jill she was a victim of a trickster. Wonderful limerick. I can vividly see Jill shouting and jumping here and there.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (3/27/2018 9:28:00 PM)

    A fun that is very common in the sub-continent, enjoyed this Limerick. (Report)Reply

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  • Edward Kofi LouisEdward Kofi Louis (3/27/2018 2:31:00 PM)

    Lake, snake! Muse and humour! ! Facing the ways of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report)Reply

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  • Muzahidul RezaMuzahidul Reza (3/27/2018 9:02:00 AM)

    Fantastic limerick, great source of laughter, thanks for sharing the poem (Report)Reply

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  • Dr Tony BrahminDr Tony Brahmin (3/27/2018 6:30:00 AM)

    Threw a rope of three feet
    She outcried 'snake' and jumped in flaccid. interesting poem rhyming stanzas dear Kumaramani.. thank you dear. tony
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  • Kostas LagosKostas Lagos (3/27/2018 4:25:00 AM)

    Nice limerick about a prank.Pranksters are ussually annoying but this poem is very good. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 27, 2018



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