Friday, January 15, 2016

Limerick R38 Cheese Loving Mouse / पनीर प्रेमी चूहा (Hindi) Comments

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There once was a mouse that loved cheese,
But in vain, as the scent made him sneeze,
Till he took some cologne
Well mixed with ozone —
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Rajnish Manga
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Offeliya Seema 03 June 2017

There once was a mouse that loved cheese, But in vain, as the scent made him sneeze, great laughter, thank you for sharing the poem with us

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Rajnish Manga 03 June 2017

Thanks for visiting this page and for your kind words of appreciation, Dear Offeliya.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 March 2016

If you please. Nice work.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 February 2016

you must read more credit more let on PM come poets more all will u adore

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Abhilasha Bhatt 22 January 2016

A lovely poem sir...liked it...thank u for sharing :)

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Spock The Vegan 15 January 2016

Thank you for posting it, even if it is not your own. I have amazed myself by writing a dozen limericks so far.

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Rajnish Manga

Rajnish Manga

Meerut / Now at Faridabad
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