Lines To Nowhere …..2102-2012 Comments

The rhythm of the poem is rocking. It seems as if I'm also a passenger of that very train.

Amazing! The style and diction of the poem is so appealing.The rhythm of the poem is lovely :)

Chug chug tracks along varied hut Shovel up coal and clank it shut Historic cost of blown up line Rusting hulks once mirrored shine Rotting planks on mangled rails Held together by crumbling nails well done, have, nt no more words to appreciate your poem be happy :)

This is a marvellous poem, i like it for its sound effect and water like flow of words, a beautiful poem. pls read my new poem.

I love the sound effect echoes here hahaha..and the facts you attached here oh it so fantastic combination..you are really talented writer...you got nice microchip in poetry processor hahahaha joking :) ..and as for your friend Sal, wish him Happy birthday Sal and Hope you have a great happiness today and best cheers in the future, May God bless you Amen. Thanks to be great friend for Sat_Unwritten Soul