Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 48,706 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Live Wire - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Finding that which has been sought,
To ground a live wire totally confused.
And experiencing the living on assumptions,
Too much.
Is worth a stumbling down to one's knees,
From those flights of fancy and living life...
Unplugged and lofty.
With a needed unexpected visit,
That only reality can connect...
Without it doubted or questioned.
Especially when the effect is personalized,
To open up one's eyes...
Seeking sugar frosted treats to try.
And bowls of rumored assorted berries described.
But instead gets electrified by truth.
Once a live wire found is grounded,
A better effect is the connection.

Topic(s) of this poem: faith


Comments about Live Wire by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Gajanan Mishra (8/31/2015 9:20:00 PM)


    only reality can connect.. good one.. (Report) Reply

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  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (8/31/2015 7:34:00 PM)


    Very wonderful drafting shared here really. Interesting sharing. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015



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