Friday, May 23, 2014

Liver Spots Comments

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Liver spots
Have begun to appear
On my sixty
Year old hands.
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Juan Olivarez
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Valerie Dohren 03 June 2014

Well, I'm 67 and no liver spots YET! ! Great poem Juan, but sadly, age doesn't always bring such contentment. Good for you though, keep it going.

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Yash Shinde 25 May 2014

Death is an inevitable end....yet people fear it....amidst such cowards, I feel glad to have found a person who at peace with laws of nature. This is what will actually keep you alive! ......lovely motivational write!

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Bluelady Blue 23 May 2014

Simple and beautiful, understanding about living, what it truly means. To be grateful for your experiences, pleased to be here, with no fear of what is to come for us all. Thank you :)

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Babatunde Aremu 23 May 2014

This is excellent! Its based on real life journey. Thanks for sharing

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Colleen Courtney 23 May 2014

Oh Juan! You know I'm a fan anyway but this piece I can so easily relate too! Just the other day I looked at my arms and thought, Jeez, my freckles are getting bigger! Lol. Needless to say they're those dreaded spots! Can so easily relate to many details in this poem. Lovely job my friend!

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