Living Apart Comments

this sounded so familiar, but i see no comment from me below so maybe i never read it before today. i like it. it appears as though you've taken a suggestion from laura 's comment. i looked at her site on PH and wonder if she is still with us. i have rarely, if ever, read a comment so much like mine (constructive criticism) . thanks for sharing. :) bri

Little details: line 4 counting from the top: You wrote 'couldn't believe I can survive'. It should be 'I can`t believe I could survive'. Line 6 counting from the bottom: you wrote ' I misses', it should be 'I miss'. Line 2 counting from the bottom should be ' so I could hug you', because use the 'could' 2 or 3 times in the previous sentences. Keep loving, Rose. Keep giving. The love we give will be returned to us by Universe, may be from the same side, or maybe from a new side. Very sweet and tender poem. Laura

hope keeps you strong, and love makes it even stronger.