Loneliness Poem by Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan

Loneliness

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I traveled alone
Through a thorny path
I could not moan
On disgraceful wrath
The world was full
With joy and fun
But there was none
Who could even say
A word of praise
In all those days
Who could just gaze
With lovely rays
All relations were false
All stations were sham
All loves were cool
Without being calm
I traveled like a moon
From dawn to noon
The moment sun sinks
I have to leave soon
My travel will remain
Like the travel of time
My innocence is a sin
My life is crime

Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
Copyright 2004 (FEELINGS)

Thursday, December 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: innocence,travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 21 April 2018

My travel will remain Like the travel of time My innocence is a sin My life is crime.......a fine potrayal of feelings...... life is full of smiles and learning to smile is an art then everything will be positive.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Poetic Breath 26 May 2016

Such a nice poem thank you for this poem

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Yasmin Khan 25 May 2016

Yes, most of the time we feel like this, quite alone even among crowd. Last lines tell the reason of loneliness.

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Lorraine Colon 25 December 2014

I traveled like a moon, from dawn to noon...... sad words, deeply felt. This poem is well expressed and touches the heart.

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Dr Pintu Mahakul 25 December 2014

ling alone is the secret of life and wonder in this universe. This is realised well. Very nice poem shared on.

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