Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

Gold Star - 50,357 Points (Ist May 1958 / Abbottabad Pakistan)

Beauty And Love - Poem by Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

Spring has come to embrace your cheeks
Lovely breeze caresses your peaks
Love itself comes and seeks
Through out the days through out the weeks

Permission to touch submission to take
The fragrance of your body to a lake
For eternal sublime for its sake
The relation of love one should partake

Where flowers have grown
Where love is known
Where beauty is shown
In sophisticated tone

Fairies sing a song to dance
About your beauty and much more
Pain plaintively cries in core
The world has not seen it before

Beauty is to die while love remains
In all hatred and disdains
In all difficulties and pains
There are no losses but only gains


Copyright 2013 (CHAINS OF LIFE)

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Beauty And Love by Col Muhamad Khalid Khan

  • Rupert Hentzau (11/1/2017 6:12:00 AM)


    You really are a tortured soul. I can't make out your English. Take the first stanza:

    Spring has come to embrace your cheeks
    Lovely breeze caresses your peaks
    Love itself comes and seeks
    Through out the days through out the weeks

    What is lovely breeze caresses your peaks?
    The first line is good: Spring has come to embrace your cheeks.
    Are you talking about a woman, or are you talking about the mountains?
    Or are you in some 'moonland' of yours?

    The 3rd and 4th line are banal and superfluous, to say the least.
    Why throughout the days and throughout the weeks?
    Why not throughout the months and throughout the years?
    And why not throughout the decades and centuries?
    When all we have is a strong hot breeze.
    Global warming has killed winter and spring.
    And frankly, in your poem I see nothing.

    But what hurts is the nonsense written by Chinedu Dike. He says,
    Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Beautiful love poem written in good rhyme scheme with insight.

    It is because of poets like these and critics like these, that I had stopped writing poems for Poemhunter.
    This site has become PoemGarbage.
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    Prativa Rani Prativa Rani (11/13/2017 10:34:00 AM)

    Wen will idiots like you stop coming to this site?
    Have you read twinkle twinkle little star? ?
    What do you know about poetry? You don't know how to respect others?
    Did your mum not teach you about respecting elderly people?
    Stop harassing poets and go with a broom somewhere to a mall or a school and start cleaning. Poem Hunter is a forum for people with rich mind and sensible heart.
    Please get out peacefully and let us leave and read poetry here.

    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/1/2017 12:02:00 PM)

    I think you are a maniac who knows nothing about poetry.With humble background and biases you're yet to grow to understand what poetry is.Keeping in view your foolish behavior you are advised to learn the basic mannerism of humanity followed by poetry but not stupidity.

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  • Sossi Khachadourian (3/4/2017 10:09:00 AM)


    Beauty is to die while love remains
    In all hatred and disdains
    In all difficulties and pains
    There are no losses but only gains
    Enjoyed the poem good one thanks for sharing
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  • Chinedu Dike (2/1/2017 8:53:00 AM)


    Piece of great elegance with rendition of words to utmost justice. Beautiful love poem written in good rhyme scheme with insight. Thanks for sharing Muhamad. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (10/28/2016 2:08:00 PM)


    This poem has tapped into the true essences of life.10
    Robert
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  • Rose Kanana (9/3/2016 8:43:00 AM)


    I like the fact that you have brought out love...not defined be beauty per se (Report) Reply

  • Chetan Pandey (12/16/2015 8:43:00 PM)


    Liked it very much........... (Report) Reply

  • Jr Cuyam (9/29/2015 11:54:00 PM)


    there are no loses.. only gains. nice a lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • (6/14/2015 7:28:00 AM)


    A beautiful poem, I really liked it.................................10 (Report) Reply

  • Yasmin Khan (4/24/2015 8:45:00 AM)


    The last stanza is a befitting conclusion to a nice poem. Beauty is transient but love never dies, even loss is gain paradoxically. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (3/10/2015 8:06:00 PM)


    Beauty is to die while love remains
    In all hatred and disdains
    In all difficulties and pains
    There are no losses but only gains
    A work of art..................10
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  • Mihaela Pirjol (12/9/2014 9:48:00 AM)


    Very true - There are no losses but only gains. A very romantic and delicate poem! (Report) Reply

  • (11/19/2014 10:52:00 AM)


    Enjoyed reading your poem, yes indeed there are no losses but only gains. (Report) Reply

  • Darlene Walsh (11/5/2014 2:23:00 PM)


    This is a beautifully romantic poem about lasting love. I enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/5/2014 8:46:00 PM)

    Thanks Darlene

  • Heather Wilkins (11/4/2014 3:49:00 AM)


    where flowers have grown where love is known where beauty is shown in sophisticated town nice writing (Report) Reply

    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/9/2014 10:47:00 PM)

    Thanks
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/9/2014 10:46:00 PM)

    Thanks
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

  • Valsa George (11/3/2014 10:04:00 AM)


    In love, there is never any loss but only gains! True love is enduring and weathers all storms and gales of life! Beauty dies out with the passage of time, but love remains! A great poem on love!

    Thank you Colonel for visiting my page and the comment made!
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    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/4/2014 1:22:00 AM)

    Thanks a lot Valsa

  • Margaret Alice Second (11/2/2014 3:01:00 AM)


    This is so true, beauty dies but the consciousness in whcih love exists lives on and all challenges was a gain for the stream of energy that flows, I agree wholeheartedly.

    Beauty is to die while love remains
    In all hatred and disdains
    In all difficulties and pains
    There are no losses but only gains
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    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (11/2/2014 9:50:00 AM)

    Thanks Margaret
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

  • Pintu Mahakul (10/29/2014 1:42:00 PM)


    Where flowers have grown, where love is known there is definitely beauty and love. Nature ever captures wonder of beauty and dances in cheer the season. Excellent composition. (Report) Reply

    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (10/30/2014 2:21:00 AM)

    Thanks Pintu
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

  • Saadat Tahir (10/28/2014 10:53:00 PM)


    nice lines, celebrating the beauty of northern Pakistan-so well portrayed.
    nice working rhymes and great content

    lovely
    liked
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    Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (10/29/2014 12:15:00 AM)

    Thanks Saadat
    Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 28, 2014


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