Loneliness Comments

Guplu very gud attempt... Pleased to explore ur literary penchant.keep on writing. Day b day it will b garnished with elegant flavour flavours.... My gud wishes for u

Flamboyant mind and boisterous youth drifted u to a monotonous loath.................. Ur tryst with a utopia Faded away d essence of genuine lov Lov z all around u still u grope for lov.......... Time has elapsed n ur taste has been changed No more r u d moms boy pampered. Again tym will come and remind u Wht u called seclusion or loneliness Z nothing bt a childish shade.

Flamboyant mind and boisterous youth Drifted u to a monotonous loath.... Ur strong tryst with a utopia Has faded away

Nicely written, Abinash. I don't think I learned what true loneliness was until I was an adult

I m glad u liked it

Thanks.. Everybody

Guplu I am so glad to find a poet within you.I go through your poem more than 10 times and every time it touched me so much.I am proud of you...keep it up.

''at this tender age of mine, my parents never understand me, '' a common feeling.. often but not always true.. anyway, Souren's right in his comment Thanks for sharing, Abinash Blessings

yes during this age loneliness becomes our best friend..........very true write............i would also tell you that this loneliness also adds up to our maturity and sometimes in writing such beautiful poems.

hope u likd it.. nd check out my new poem.. my best friend

my first poem... hope u liked it

A very good expression of the state of a mind of every teenager.. We had all been there- us, who had gone and grown through that age.. P: S: Don't worry about what others think of you, as they say 'kuch to lok kahenge logo ka kaam hai kehna' ;)