Once a garden of beauty, now wilted and torn,
Lies the petals of love that once brightly adorned.
The fragrance is gone, the colors have faded,
A reminder of life that has tragically degraded.
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Reminds me of Le Petit prince quote, It's the time you spent on your rose that makes your rose so important.
3) By repeated use of words memory/ies, remember, reminder, rekindle etc. the poet has created a magical enigmatic atmosphere that is poignant definitely, but lightly haunting too. Top rated poem, in my wisdom. POD is small wonder. Write more and share your poems. We are eager for more.
This poem is a metaphorical excellence. The withered petals take the place of lost love, passion that is drained of emotions, a life that is emptied of its colours. And memories galore
Congratulations, Poet Ayomiposi. Today this poem is The Poem of The Day- Members. Congratulations again
A poem deserving of POD. Congratulations and thank you for sharing!