Lonely Shame Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Lonely Shame

Rating: 2.8


Before my hand strikes the door.
I don't know my mind, Please stop!
Short knuckles white, light flashed.
She will hear me scream, or worse.
My door stopper, is clinched
inside the suns mouth, I run,
Bare, friendly, sharp, thorn ed soft
branches grasp me, as lost lover.
Overcome by tremors, blanched
fear, to lay choking on a raw tongue.
My last hope of salvation, is rejected.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bright Rose 17 May 2009

wow, you can't stop impressing me, that was lovely 'story telling' poem, I really enjoyed reading it, so strong and touching, very well done :)

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Viola Grey 09 May 2009

I quite like this...I can almost see you talking to yourself on a doorstep before slapping your own face with regret...nice work.

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Ashleymarie love 07 May 2009

it is always smarter to think before you act good poem Ashleymarie

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From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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