Long Life Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Long Life

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Birthday today has come after long way
With wisdom and in knowledge to stay
Who says “person is loosing a year’?
When he is gripped by permanent fear

Long life may not be the wish
Good lunch or dinner may like to finish
Friends and relatives may wish longer life
More and more may come from dearest wife

It is simple reason
To be with loved persons
Kids and youngsters enjoy the game
The birthday is credit to claim

It is unique chance to look back
Just glimpse over back life and its stake
Little casual vision to look ahead
The danger, if exists, to be silently read

I would love and pray almighty
To keep health and mind steady
Not so much of wealth and asset
But simple life to be spent yet

Each moment not to fly by
Without mission or try
I shall wish it to the services
Of poor and needy with so much of promises

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 December 2013

Moushumi Khondaker I would love and pray almighty To keep health and mind steady Not so much of wealth and asset But simple life to be spent yet Each moment not to fly by Without mission or try I shall wish it to the services Of poor and needy with so much of promises.................... 15 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 December 2013

Wow, Awesome. TJ West21 minutes ago Well written and very easy to understand and follow. Comment +1 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 December 2013

Lucifera Santez22 minutes ago liked it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 21 December 2013

Birthday today has come after long way With wisdom and in knowledge to stay

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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