Long May We Live Poem by Francie Lynch

Long May We Live

Rating: 4.7


The smoke, not the fire,
Got in my eyes;
The idea, not my brain,
Lives on outside;
Our love, not the heart,
Allows us to thrive.
Long will we live
Long after we die.

Wednesday, March 17, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: afterlife ,death,fire,human brain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The mind is a product of the brain, but not dependent on it.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 March 2021

A poem of great depth. Beautifully crafted.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 March 2021

Happy St. Pattu's Day Excellent Poem Bravo!

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Francie Lynch

Francie Lynch

Monaghan, Ireland
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