Long shadows linger
In November's leaf- strewn park.
The year is dying.
A brilliantly inked composition. Truly splendid.....5 stars*****
Thanks Susan and Bernard..your perceptive comments make composing poems like this well worthwhile.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Awesome write- -words perfectly chosen and perfectly set in their lines like diamonds in their setting. Superb! Top marks