Longing Comments

Meaning write. Very true said, man's life is full of dreams and longings. I loved the lines...... Lest sun grows dim Moon trims her dreams And stars'fall Imminent it may seem... Thanks for sharing with us.

desire is the base of human life...nice poem like it

Man lives with long only which is ever expanding .... very well expressed

Human life is full of longings..... some made cospicuous, some hidden, some realized, some shattered! However these longings prompt us to live on! Beautifully presented Deepak!

perfectly pictured echoes of longing.