Richard R. Navarro

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Longing - Poem by Richard R. Navarro

potapotapota...

the tap leaks.
so does my heart,
upon reading
your poem,
of a speck of memory
too insignificant to remember
yet too precious to forget.

a million what if's,
as i look
into the horizon,
an empty stare
sewing fluffy dreams
on a tapestry of pain.

potapotapota...


Comments about Longing by Richard R. Navarro

  • (4/13/2008 9:02:00 PM)


    very strong, very nice...thank you (Report) Reply

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (4/9/2008 7:48:00 PM)


    i'm longing for more....of your works........... (Report) Reply

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  • Yuri Duraan (4/9/2008 10:10:00 AM)


    Beautiful comparisson.... creates sadness.... I love it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Thursday, April 10, 2008
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