Look On Poem by Fallen Too Far

Look On

Rating: 4.8


look on
this is me
standing here
on the side lines
quiet, but acutely aware
of you
maybe you noticed.
look on
while i sing
a song only i know
and think
of your smile
soft, and inviting.
this is my life
exposed and
naked
i want to share it with you.
look on
while i watch
this world
slowly unravel
with you in it
unfazed.
this is me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeaze An 11 May 2006

I really liked your poem. It is so..... you know, real. Perfect

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