Lost Child Poem by XxAmieLee xX

Lost Child

Rating: 4.8


She sits in the corner,
all alone, with no one to love her,
she always wonders,
how come.........

She's a lost child,
lost in her own little world,
she always cries and wonders,
how come.........

She's a beautiful child,
with all potential silenced,
she sits there and wonders,
how come.........

She's had enough, she's non-existant,
people mourn this news, and wonder,
how come............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 28 May 2008

I guess you were trying to break my heart with this one. Looks like you succeeded. Its hard to put a number on emotion. That's what I'm left to do. I'll go a 9 becaus I don't think its a 10 and I'm afraid if I give it an 8, I won't be able to sleep tonight. GW62

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Anita Blake 18 November 2007

i really like this write it hits home i have sat in a corner thinking those thoughts for far too long

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Professor Murder 14 November 2007

This is very good.... most of my poems are set in depression, however i think my poems are bad, but thank you for taking the time to read some of them. If u ever feel like tlking u can message me, it up to you... ~The lost soul that is~ MaXxwell Murder

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Alison Cassidy 05 November 2007

Oh Amie, this is a beautiful piece - so moving and understated. Sad. Sad. Sad. love, Allie xxxx

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