Arthur Knackmus

Rookie (1/29/55 / Olney Illinois U.S.A.)

Looking Up To The Sky At Night - Poem by Arthur Knackmus

Looking up to the sky at night,
Why are there no stars shining bright?
Many times I have looked up for any stars light,
Just to see total darkness and no stars that shine white.

Is this Gods way of telling us in heaven there is a fight?
Over something as simple as does might make right.
We just have to submit ourselves to God and hold on tight.
Because we humans are in a world with a hopeless plight.

By now you know I am quite right,
That sometimes there are no bright white lights at night.
Yes, some stars are a little red or yellow depending on their
energy, which is light.
From this you can tell I have good eye sight.

It`s not my intention to scare people into a fear or fright,
About this matter I have chosen to write.
No matter who we are, eventually we will go through a blight.
Even if you are King Arthur or a White Knight.

In this small town an angel could show the height of his flight.
Amazing you at night, going higher than a kite.
This world is just a play and West Salem is God`s chosen site.
Please pray that in Illinois every thing will be all right.


Comments about Looking Up To The Sky At Night by Arthur Knackmus

  • Larisa Rzhepishevska (4/25/2010 3:04:00 PM)


    The poem is great and you are great in rhyming. God bless you! With warmest wishes, Larisa (Report) Reply

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  • (4/18/2010 2:13:00 PM)


    beautiful poem... nicely set i like the united rithm of all the poem, hard to keep it but you managed to do it, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • (4/17/2010 4:05:00 PM)


    I'm glad I read this. Your poem really made me think about life. && it was enjoyable to read. It really is an amazing poem. (Report) Reply

  • (3/16/2010 8:54:00 PM)


    I love all your poems. A lot of them are really truthful. I absolutely love them! ! keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • (3/5/2010 6:05:00 AM)


    Enjoyable and true a nice reed (Report) Reply

  • (2/11/2010 3:19:00 PM)


    Good write! ! ! ! i have always loved the stars sinse I wax little! (Report) Reply

  • (2/9/2010 6:50:00 PM)


    Thanks for your comments about my poetry, I'm glad they uplifted you a little, you are right though, I can and have written much more.... I will post some more soon.

    No sorry my songs arn't for sale in a store.... I may go back into it one day though, when I'm feeling confident enough...

    I have read yours and they flow quite well... Keep it up.
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  • (1/21/2010 11:55:00 AM)


    wowwww
    glad I chanced on you
    nice rhythmic style.......
    a nice sing song way
    good write Arthur
    (Report) Reply

  • (1/17/2010 11:01:00 AM)


    Love it..It realle makes you think and
    you found the perfect words to rhyme with others,
    wich makes it a perfect poem
    (Report) Reply

  • Emma Adamyan (10/4/2009 1:31:00 PM)


    no doubt this version has its right to exist and the poem is mysterious (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2009 6:21:00 PM)


    again. job well done. very soulful. it makes me think... (Report) Reply

  • (3/9/2009 8:36:00 PM)


    All of your poems are intriguing. His wonders are really something to sit and think about huh? Good job! (Report) Reply

  • (11/14/2008 10:29:00 PM)


    great poem i always did like stars...

    great piece of work
    (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (11/13/2008 8:45:00 PM)


    I love of the rhyme.......like a song that dances......beautifully.yeahhh the stars not always bright! ! ! good job Arthur. (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2008 4:03:00 PM)


    very nice piece. i like your style, its very unique, and interesting to read =] (Report) Reply

  • (11/13/2008 2:50:00 PM)


    What a pleasure your poetry is. You certainly have a God given gift :) Brilliant structure 10/10 again (Report) Reply

  • Marilyn Lott (11/13/2008 2:40:00 PM)


    That was interesting, Arthur, how you put your words together in this way. Not easy to do. You have a very unique style.

    Best Wishes,
    Marilyn
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  • (11/10/2008 6:56:00 PM)


    RIGHT ON. ;)
    wow I cannot beleive how many times you were able to ryme the same sounding words, incredible!
    I could never pull somthing like that off.
    (Report) Reply

  • (9/11/2008 4:35:00 PM)


    I gave this a nine because some things aren't right
    So it's best to never speak of them and definitely do not write.

    GW62
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  • (1/25/2008 2:54:00 PM)


    Fabulous poem! !
    I give this write a 10 for sure! !
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 2, 2003

Poem Edited: Monday, March 27, 2006


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