A Betrayed Tree Poem by kite remedy
A Betrayed Tree
Dance,
these boughs and branches
sway,
revelry at the midday,
sun,
hates me and hides behind
the rain
love I have, I grow is in vain
but my leaves,
my bark are still strong enough to live
so me dance,
a heartbreak to fight against
dance,
my bending boughs and branches,
dance,
on my own roots, I can still stand..
yeah be like tree strong and free.......... Good write......
A tree of betrayal dying of its own act.Good job Kite.
this was short but potrayed a lot of thought and effort- nice work, i liked it
simple and nice...read my poem 'a never ending story- exploitation'
The poem breathes positive feelings and emotions! This is an important aspect of life! Never to feel lost in this arena of life! Your poem does convey a good message! 10! -Raj Nandy
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/8/2024 6:50:25 PM # 1.0.0
a strong tree u are, indeed we are all scorched by the trials that are set before us, and are betrayed often by those we hold dear, well illustrated, nice piece