A Betrayed Tree Poem by kite remedy

A Betrayed Tree

Rating: 3.0


Dance,
these boughs and branches
sway,
revelry at the midday,
sun,
hates me and hides behind
the rain
love I have, I grow is in vain
but my leaves,
my bark are still strong enough to live
so me dance,
a heartbreak to fight against
dance,
my bending boughs and branches,
dance,
on my own roots, I can still stand..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a strong tree u are, indeed we are all scorched by the trials that are set before us, and are betrayed often by those we hold dear, well illustrated, nice piece

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 11 January 2009

yeah be like tree strong and free.......... Good write......

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 January 2009

A tree of betrayal dying of its own act.Good job Kite.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 11 January 2009

this was short but potrayed a lot of thought and effort- nice work, i liked it

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Subbaraman N V 12 January 2009

Short and sweet with a message! Congrats!

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Michelle Melody 14 January 2009

Absolutely beautiful 10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 January 2009

simple and nice...read my poem 'a never ending story- exploitation'

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Celine Socrates 14 January 2009

beautiful poem. quite deceptively simple.

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Raj Nandy 14 January 2009

The poem breathes positive feelings and emotions! This is an important aspect of life! Never to feel lost in this arena of life! Your poem does convey a good message! 10! -Raj Nandy

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Seema Aarella 14 January 2009

very poignant write...of emotion!

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