A Betrayed Tree

Rating: 3.0
these boughs and branches
revelry at the midday,
hates me and hides behind
the rain
love I have, I grow is in vain
but my leaves,
my bark are still strong enough to live
so me dance,
a heartbreak to fight against
my bending boughs and branches,
on my own roots, I can still stand..
Sunday, January 11, 2009
Michelle Melody 14 January 2009
Absolutely beautiful 10
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simple and nice...read my poem 'a never ending story- exploitation'
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Celine Socrates 14 January 2009
beautiful poem. quite deceptively simple.
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Raj Nandy 14 January 2009
The poem breathes positive feelings and emotions! This is an important aspect of life! Never to feel lost in this arena of life! Your poem does convey a good message! 10! -Raj Nandy
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Seema Aarella 14 January 2009
very poignant write...of emotion!
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Ency Bearis 14 January 2009
nice flow..great write...
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Loved the flow.. beautiful!
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Rinzu Susan Rajan 13 January 2009
heartbreak and the pain...poor tree thats when it couldn't stand up on its own roots... loved the comparison u made... : D
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I love the ending.. Great write...
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Joseph Poewhit 12 January 2009
Life is a dance, just have to decide which steps
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