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kite remedy (30 - 04 - 1989 / Kediri)

Poems by kite remedy : 17 / 83

A Betrayed Tree - Poem by kite remedy

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Dance,
these boughs and branches
sway,
revelry at the midday,
sun,
hates me and hides behind
the rain
love I have, I grow is in vain
but my leaves,
my bark are still strong enough to live
so me dance,
a heartbreak to fight against
dance,
my bending boughs and branches,
dance,
on my own roots, I can still stand..

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Poems by kite remedy : 17 / 83

Michelle Melody (1/14/2009 1:21:00 PM)
Absolutely beautiful 10 (Report)Reply
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (1/14/2009 8:47:00 AM)
simple and nice...read my poem 'a never ending story- exploitation' (Report)Reply
Celine Socrates (1/14/2009 8:19:00 AM)
beautiful poem. quite deceptively simple. (Report)Reply
Raj Nandy (1/14/2009 7:24:00 AM)
The poem breathes positive feelings and emotions! This is an important aspect of
life! Never to feel lost in this arena of life! Your poem does convey a good message! 10!
-Raj Nandy (Report)Reply
Seema Aarella (1/14/2009 2:52:00 AM)
very poignant write...of emotion! (Report)Reply
Ency Bearis (1/14/2009 2:32:00 AM)
nice flow..great write... (Report)Reply
Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (1/13/2009 2:09:00 PM)
Loved the flow.. beautiful! (Report)Reply
Rinzu Susan Rajan (1/13/2009 3:52:00 AM)
heartbreak and the pain...poor tree thats when it couldn't stand up on its own roots...

loved the comparison u made...

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Krista Churchill (1/12/2009 11:31:00 PM)
I love the ending.. Great write... (Report)Reply
Joseph Poewhit (1/12/2009 7:50:00 AM)
Life is a dance, just have to decide which steps (Report)Reply
Subbaraman N V (1/12/2009 12:06:00 AM)
Short and sweet with a message! Congrats! (Report)Reply
Amy (1/11/2009 6:37:00 AM)
this was short but potrayed a lot of thought and effort- nice work, i liked it (Report)Reply
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (1/11/2009 6:30:00 AM)
A tree of betrayal dying of its own act.Good job Kite. (Report)Reply
Dr Hitesh Sheth (1/11/2009 5:39:00 AM)
yeah be like tree
strong and free..........
Good write...... (Report)Reply
Allen Steble (1/11/2009 4:25:00 AM)
a strong tree u are, indeed we are all scorched by the trials that are set before us, and are betrayed often by those we hold dear, well illustrated, nice piece (Report)Reply
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (1/11/2009 1:26:00 AM)
deep thought, well done, thanks for sharing (Report)Reply
Vaibhav Pandey (1/11/2009 1:17:00 AM)
very nice indeed...
thanks for sharing (Report)Reply