Losing Love-Losing Control Poem by James Greene

Losing Love-Losing Control

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Thoughts run through me,
These I scarcely can believe.
Just pouring out my heart,
In my sorrow, I must grieve.

Shadows of darkness overwhelming my soul
Hearts shattering In so many pieces
Contempt and animosity takes over; losing control
When the gift of love so suddenly ceases

Like rivers overflowing, such uncontollable tears.
Searching for heart's felt beauty, as in these last few years.
Remembering the day, when our eyes first met.
Such magical feelings, engraved in stone were set.

Hearts, pounding like the rumble of thunder,
Waves of lightning running right through us
Anticipating so fully, a lifetime of beauty
Feelings of magical love, ever so boundless

Can not true love, Continue to prevail,
Giving all of one's being, how can this fail?
Time and distance, can be ever so cruel,
What was I thinking, how could I be such a fool.

So In my sorrow, life must go on,
Each day I will strive.
Seeking the little miracles of time
To find happiness in my quest to survive.

UNFINISHED, AS ARE THE ANSWERS


(March 6 2007)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malini Kadir 13 April 2007

James your words have such a natural flow...........don't ever stop writing...let your heart speak for you!

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