Loss Of Life......... Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

Loss Of Life.........

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When the faith is lost in the heaven
Then the peace will become an enemy in our soul
When the love is lost in our heart
Then the nature of behavior become full of sins
When the knowledge is lost in the school
Then the nation's future will suffer from wisdom
When the kindness is lost in the nation
Then the people of the nation become immoral
When a home is lost its brightness of life
Then the family will suffer from mantle agony
When the nature is lost its beauty
Then the pleasant green pastures become like a dessert land
When all those prayers are kept away from God
Then the tears of life can not be cured

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright @2009 Ravi Sathasivam

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Martyres 14 April 2009

Quite an insightful poem...you may like to avoid excessive use of the definite article to make it read better...thought provoking all the same

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Seema Chowdhury 14 April 2009

a 10+ it is such a wonderful thought. just the kind of poem i would love to read and write. thanks alot for sharing this lovely and inspirational piece of art with all. God bless you. take care

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Chitra - 14 April 2009

profound and definitely highly meaningful...lets not loose the essence of prayer

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so simple, yet insightful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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