Lost If Given Not In Delight Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Lost If Given Not In Delight

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Food not eaten fair is day-long plight,
Not stilled, a snore is plight of whole night,
A prodigal son's spoils
Put you in lasting toils,
Given not in delight never gets given quite.
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Words well said | 39.11.14 |

Saturday, July 27, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: warning
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Beware of this: food not taken in joy, a snore not stilled soon, a prodigal son's spoils, and charity not given with cheers—as good as lost.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 July 2019

A beautiful limerick with warning on food has been captivatingly delineated. Thank you dear sir for sharing this gem.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 28 July 2019

Thanks indeed, dear KM. What I like about this thought is: Whatever is given with grudge never gets given at all in true sense.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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