Monday, March 13, 2006

Lost Mooring Comments

Rating: 5.0

I anchored
a windless night
embraced in a dream
struck by moonlight
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Chuck Audette
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Barry Van Allen 21 April 2007

Chuck, A little unexpected, but nicely done! You better be careful though, because... that is the kind of thing that will keep you married! :) B.V.A.

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R H 23 April 2006

The imagery here was stunning, the words here struck me - one to add to my favourites. Thanks Chuck! Justine.

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Duncan Wyllie 24 March 2006

A clear understanding of a beautiful night.Amazing words.Love Duncan

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Dan Tharp 15 March 2006

yes... different style, but I like it very much. dan

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Anna Russell 14 March 2006

Wow. The threats were worth it! This is gorgeous Chuck - a different style for you but one you should definitely try more often.10. Hugs Anna xxx

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Esther Leclerc 13 March 2006

'...the stars poured in/my heart poured out' - really dreamy, that. That's a very nice ship to be on, if only the voyage could last a bit longer. Wonderful poem!

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Chuck Audette

Chuck Audette

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