Lost Stanzas Poem by Daniel Brick

Lost Stanzas

Rating: 4.8


What difference would it make
that I lose hope in writing poems
because trash talk on TV and foul speech
in the streets have cluttered the Paths of Poetry?
And you will answer, None at all, because
our poems will ascend to a purer realm, where cleansed
they will orbit the ancient spheres of harmony and hope,
and thus enhanced, they will descend in their full glory
into the hearing of those who most need this rescue.

What difference would it make
that I abandon my apartment
in Inver Grove Heights, and went to live
in my niece's cabin inside a Wisconsin forest?
And you would answer, None at all, because
you are still with us whether the place is
Inver Grove Heights or the Sonoma Desert in Arizona
or some fabled place of myth. So with good graces
go to your Wisconsin forest and renew your imagination.

What difference would it make
that we are tired of our endeavors, lose
our focus, wander in circles instead of proceeding
resolutely to our shared goals and end results?
And you would answer, None at all, because
we will always lift each other's spirits,
and the poems now buried in our souls
will lift themselves of their own accord, and greet
us at the crossroads where poets and poems unite.

Sunday, May 27, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: encouragement,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 29 May 2018

What difference would it make that I lose hope in writing poems because trash talk on TV and foul speech in the streets have cluttered the Paths of Poetry? And you will answer, None at all, because our poems will ascend to a purer realm, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I love your deep faith in the power of poetry that will prevail in the midst of negative currents and surely reach those who need them most.

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Bill Cantrell 27 May 2018

Your very presence in poemhunter is much appreciated my friend, the layers of thought rolling into words has lifted the spirits of many including myself, this poem is another example of distinguished verse after verse, Stanzas that have entertained deep thought can never be lost, they are absorbed into the reader and becomes a part of him or her, a great write Daniel! ! ! 10++++++

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yoonoos peerbocus 27 May 2018

lose our focus....wander/a meaningful right

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