Monday, January 2, 2023

Lost Vision Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am the child
Yes the child,
Lost in the unnecessary battle fields
Hoping to have a vision
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Malong David Kuok
COMMENTS

Congratulations to you, dear poet, on this poem selected as POD

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Pallavi Tripathi 22 March 2023

Peace is my only dream.. I felt that

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2023

CONGRATULATIONS most deserving as The Member Poem Of The Day. I congratulate you from within my heart, TOP Marks!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 March 2023

All have it about PEACE, everywhere..BUT we cannot find peace, we cannot get peace, since we are not and we are never at PEACE all the time, but you wrote an excellent poem, make the world awake: we wish peace, but we are only causing WAR/fighting

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Jayne Louise Davies 21 March 2023

Congratulations on POD! Thanks for sharing x

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" Peace is my only dream As I stand with all refugees". … in these times of unending fruitless strife, everyone is a refugee….powerful write. Superb poetry. Top score

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