one lip one touch
two bodies one soul
this is what is called love
Very beautiful, suggestive poem. Each word does the job it must do. No superfluous, needless words. The lines suggest a deep, intimate union, a wholeness achieved through the comingling of the physical and the spiritual. Good job! (Only one linking verb needed: 'this is what IS called love.'
beautifully wrapped up feeling. Dear Asif, Is your this poem according to the parameters of the haiko? i suspect it is not. please consult Mr. Yoonoos Peerbocus.
WOW IS HAIKU, PLEASE MR AIZAS i WANT TO BE YOUR STUDENT thanx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
two hearts one beat one dream two greet I call this love what you say Asif? +++++++10 as always regards anjali