Ipsita Mohapatra


Love - A Foolish Feeling - Poem by Ipsita Mohapatra

Love I must say is funny.
The man is flourished,
The man is doomed.
It gives pain without touching,
It stops the heart without corporeally damaging.
It twists you,
It shatters you,
Sometimes in a good way,
Sometimes the worst way possible.
The love we give,
The love we get,
All turns to sorrow.
Grief consumes like a thunder cloud in a storm.
Love is rose,
hold it carefully,
else you are pricked.

Topic(s) of this poem: love


Comments about Love - A Foolish Feeling by Ipsita Mohapatra

  • Jazib Kamalvi (10/4/2017 3:18:00 AM)


    A sublime start with a nice poem, Ipsita. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (11/21/2015 2:28:00 PM)


    Grief consumes like a thunder cloud in a storm.
    Love is rose,
    hold it carefully,
    else you are pricked.. very good expressions of love experience. love remains a mystery always. thank you very much. tony
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  • (11/19/2015 7:05:00 AM)


    Aahaaa :) A NYC one :* ^_^ The love we give The love we get All turns into sorrow (Report) Reply

    Ipsita Mohapatra Ipsita Mohapatra (11/19/2015 7:50:00 AM)

    thanks :))

  • Anil Kumar Panda (11/18/2015 10:34:00 AM)


    But why people fall in love is a mystery. Nice write. (Report) Reply

    Ipsita Mohapatra Ipsita Mohapatra (11/18/2015 5:52:00 PM)

    i guess so.. thanks :))

  • Souren Mondal (11/18/2015 1:41:00 AM)


    Yes, love is a two-sided sword.. It can make everything beautiful or miserable... A well written poem Ipsita.. Thank you.. (Report) Reply

    Ipsita Mohapatra Ipsita Mohapatra (11/18/2015 7:59:00 AM)

    yeah it is.. :) thank you :))

  • (11/17/2015 11:27:00 PM)


    It stops the heart without corporally damaging...loved this line..👌 (Report) Reply

    Ipsita Mohapatra Ipsita Mohapatra (11/17/2015 11:37:00 PM)

    [3

  • The chinmay (11/17/2015 8:35:00 PM)


    true....it always gives pain...good thnkg..nicr (Report) Reply

    Ipsita Mohapatra Ipsita Mohapatra (11/17/2015 11:09:00 PM)

    thank you :))

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 18, 2015


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