K. Jared Hosein

Rookie - 0 Points (1986 / Trinidad and Tobago, West Indies.)

(love) A Kiss - Poem by K. Jared Hosein

A kiss down by the riverside,
When the waterspouts
Comes to life
And across the evergreen glide.
A kiss with your mouth open wide,
With noses nuzzling
And lying on a foliage mattress
With nothing to hide.

A kiss beneath the harvest moon,
In the wheat and the rye,
When pixies spiral to an eventide rune
'Til the morning Phoenix soars by.
A kiss during a fiery noon
In the fields of midday bloom
And so sings the loon
While petals rise from the gloom.

A kiss, for birds to sing,
For the winter to turn to spring
An exchange of bliss,
A kiss,
To melt a world of snow
In one breath of warm mist.


Comments about (love) A Kiss by K. Jared Hosein

  • Inguruwattadewage Pushpadewa Chaminda (11/12/2018 10:57:00 PM)

    dear poet the poem word order is very nice thank (Report)Reply

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  • Pat Weddle (3/20/2006 2:01:00 PM)

    Brilliant use of feelings using both the tactile and the visual. Also rhythmically hypnotic word repetition. (Report)Reply

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  • Dan Tharp (3/19/2006 10:04:00 AM)

    Nicely done, Jared...

    dan
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  • Michael Gale (3/18/2006 10:08:00 PM)

    Nicely done so right, rightly done by light. You write well, and you are right. To each their own, it's how you put your spin on looks of others.

    Best regards-Mike Gale.
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  • Rufina Moor (3/18/2006 4:53:00 PM)

    Really liked this poem. :)
    Awesome choice of words.
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  • Nimal Dunuhinga (3/14/2006 11:11:00 AM)

    Oh! what a marvelous eternal kiss you are describing.Splendid K................. (Report)Reply

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  • Daniel Tyler (3/11/2006 3:00:00 PM)

    I enjoy your romantic poems particularly. This is stunning. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 11, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 27, 2006


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