How glorious new beginnings are
Of love and life and laughter
You made your wish, you caught a star
It's happy ever after
The love that's yours is immense
It's only worthless things your losing
No more sitting on the fence
There's no better path for choosing
The light you have beside of you
It guides you from uncertainty
You'll no longer be asking who
You'll be sharing with eternity
When the darkness falls from up above
You'll be shining like a star so bright
Because you've found your own true love
You'll shine on through the night
First of all i notice that the Laughter wich is in the title is not properly showed in the poem. The lines do represent love and life but laughter is only said in the second line and not really shown in the words. also what does no more on the fence represent? I could not possibly know from what i have read. Other than that placesing some punctuation in the right areas is all that you really need. The poem is fine other wise but does not really stand out like other poems and i dont really feel as if it will bring me back to read it again. Thank you
1.I am wishing my friend and his new wife a life filled with those 3 ingredients.2 The fence represents the single life and the later touched on uncertainty.3 lol
This is a well-written poetry. Love And Life And The Laughter are Everything.
very good well put together, I could imagine walking through that one.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it's not bad. just remember, gareth...not all poems have to rhyme. let your thoughts pour onto the paper..don't force them...and then once you've drained the mind...begin to pick apart the poem and erase/change unnecessary words. if you can't rhyme a word, don't sweat it...just enter the one that best describes how you 'feel'.