Love And Life And Laughter Poem by Gareth Simpson

Love And Life And Laughter

Rating: 4.8


How glorious new beginnings are
Of love and life and laughter
You made your wish, you caught a star
It's happy ever after

The love that's yours is immense
It's only worthless things your losing
No more sitting on the fence
There's no better path for choosing

The light you have beside of you
It guides you from uncertainty
You'll no longer be asking who
You'll be sharing with eternity

When the darkness falls from up above
You'll be shining like a star so bright
Because you've found your own true love
You'll shine on through the night

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jonny Brackney 24 January 2012

it's not bad. just remember, gareth...not all poems have to rhyme. let your thoughts pour onto the paper..don't force them...and then once you've drained the mind...begin to pick apart the poem and erase/change unnecessary words. if you can't rhyme a word, don't sweat it...just enter the one that best describes how you 'feel'.

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Juan Guzman 29 June 2012

First of all i notice that the Laughter wich is in the title is not properly showed in the poem. The lines do represent love and life but laughter is only said in the second line and not really shown in the words. also what does no more on the fence represent? I could not possibly know from what i have read. Other than that placesing some punctuation in the right areas is all that you really need. The poem is fine other wise but does not really stand out like other poems and i dont really feel as if it will bring me back to read it again. Thank you

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Johnny Big Balls 29 June 2012

1.I am wishing my friend and his new wife a life filled with those 3 ingredients.2 The fence represents the single life and the later touched on uncertainty.3 lol

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Natasha Hochar 29 June 2012

This made me smile.

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Terry O'leary 30 June 2012

Nice poem... good rhyming... keep it up... Terry

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Riza Braholli 20 June 2018

This is a well-written poetry. Love And Life And The Laughter are Everything.

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Phil Daniels 15 December 2017

very good well put together, I could imagine walking through that one.

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Karen Kerubo 03 November 2016

Lovely and well written

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Urshula Davis 05 July 2012

The first set of lines are like EVERYTHING! ! Nice poem.

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Johnny Big Balls 30 June 2012

ok ruth thanks for checking it out.

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