Love As It Should Be [senryu] Poem by David Zvekic

Love As It Should Be [senryu]

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More beautiful than
I expected her to be -
Love as it should be...

A kinder thought and
warmer word than I deserve -
She shared them with me...

No softer hands are
there than those she held on me -
Love as she touched me...

No other cause cries
clear as these: I'll die for her -
What's happened to me?

- October 27,2005

Thursday, October 27, 2005
Topic(s) of this poem: october
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Faith Elizabeth Brigham 27 October 2005

very lovely poem...it moved me as poems should do if they are good...i enjoyed this so much! best regards-faith

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