V.Muthu Manickam

Veteran Poet - 1,682 Points (5th January / Peraiyur, Madurai District, India)

Love Began With A Sorry! - Poem by V.Muthu Manickam

When I lifted my cup of tea
A drop fell on you, without any idea

Your face become so angry
I was tempted to tender sorry

During the journey, you broke the silence
Like signaling a symbolic acceptance

You queried about the destination
I guided you to your satisfaction

Your talk was very friendly
Our conversation became fondly

Even after the journey, we spoke a lot
We travelled to many colorful spot

Our love begun so accidentally
Impressed to ignite immortally

You became my life’s honey,
Gifted to me, during the journey!

Love began with a sorry
Now you propose to marry!

Above poem is from “FIRE WITHOUT FIRE IS ETERNAL! AND OTHER POEMS ON HAPPY LOVE ” by Mr.V.Muthu manickam. Copyright is held by V.Muthu manickam.

Topic(s) of this poem: love and art

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Also an experience in a Journey (mixed) .

Comments about Love Began With A Sorry! by V.Muthu Manickam

  • Rajnish Manga (4/16/2017 9:20:00 AM)

    So lovely and crafty. This is indeed a masterpiece. The imagery and the narrative is just captivating.
    Love began with a sorry
    Now you propose to marry!
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  • (8/12/2015 1:56:00 AM)

    A wonderful and heartfelt poem, great description and imagery of how your love began! Love the ending! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

    Vmuthu Manickam (8/12/2015 5:26:00 AM)

    Thank you Ann. You shall also enjoy many poems of mine in the times to dawn.

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Poem Submitted: Friday, March 13, 2015

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 14, 2015

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