Love Began With A Sorry! Poem by V.Muthu Manickam

Love Began With A Sorry!

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When I lifted my cup of tea
A drop fell on you, without any idea

Your face become so angry
I was tempted to tender sorry

During the journey, you broke the silence
Like signaling a symbolic acceptance

You queried about the destination
I guided you to your satisfaction

Your talk was very friendly
Our conversation became fondly

Even after the journey, we spoke a lot
We travelled to many colorful spot

Our love begun so accidentally
Impressed to ignite immortally

You became my life’s honey,
Gifted to me, during the journey!

Love began with a sorry
Now you propose to marry!


Above poem is from “FIRE WITHOUT FIRE IS ETERNAL! AND OTHER POEMS ON HAPPY LOVE ” by Mr.V.Muthu manickam. Copyright is held by V.Muthu manickam.

Friday, March 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Also an experience in a Journey (mixed) .
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 16 April 2017

So lovely and crafty. This is indeed a masterpiece. The imagery and the narrative is just captivating. Love began with a sorry Now you propose to marry!

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Roseann Shawiak 12 August 2015

A wonderful and heartfelt poem, great description and imagery of how your love began! Love the ending! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Vmuthu Manickam 12 August 2015

Thank you Ann. You shall also enjoy many poems of mine in the times to dawn.

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V.Muthu Manickam

V.Muthu Manickam

Peraiyur, Madurai District, India
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