After you left me
I’m just a lonely woman
Gazing in the mirror
Sadly tracing all the love bites
You had engraved deeply on my body
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hm. I like this, short and simple, and a fun play on words. Only one comment, why 'deeper'? There's nothing you're comparing it to, so it feels kind of incomplete. Why don't you just say 'deeply' or something?