shivayadav yadav

Rookie - 67 Points (Aug 24 1956 / Karur / Tamilnadu / India.)

Love Box - Poem by shivayadav yadav

Happy to know that you are stepping,
Stepping in to my sweet home!
Sweet December brings dreams.
Prosperous life is leading with love.
Happiest moments may be engraved,
With gentle and soft in to my heart!
Getting love, like a breez in my soul.
Feelings of your clutch is melting me,
Hey, Even in this month too!
Get ready to start the next interesting,
Interesting game that we have very often!
I am filling my pearls in to the fabulous box
Dont close the box until the dawn!


Comments about Love Box by shivayadav yadav

  • (1/2/2010 11:04:00 AM)


    ‘…Feelings of your clutch is melting me…’

    Will e’er remain open box…and let dawn never come…LOL!
    10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (12/24/2009 11:03:00 AM)


    No wonder Manohar Malgaonkar wrote 'A thousand lovers' so long ago. Now I see the truth..........arya (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2009 1:32:00 PM)


    Nice title
    with a good contents
    well gone
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  • Sathyanarayana M V S (12/19/2009 10:55:00 PM)


    Sir,
    There is a marked change in your approach. Higly evocative poem with beautiful lines. The last two lines speak a lot allegorically. Very nice work Sir.
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 19, 2009



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