Er.(Dr.) PRADEEP KUMAR MOHANTY

Rookie - 186 Points (31 DEC 1959 / INDIA)

Love & Deceit - Poem by Er.(Dr.) PRADEEP KUMAR MOHANTY

Moon has gone black-spotted,
By Sun’s love that is deep-hearted.

But Sun has always anger carrying with,
Moon has certainly betrayed from beneath.

Thus Sun learnt the art of deceit,
It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays
And goes with the twilight.


Comments about Love & Deceit by Er.(Dr.) PRADEEP KUMAR MOHANTY

  • Swetha VanakayalapatiSwetha Vanakayalapati (6/27/2012 10:04:00 AM)

    Thus Sun learnt the art of deceit,
    It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays
    And goes with the twilight.

    the description similar like a melting snow.......candle wax.......
    the finite line sun to go away with twilights is very impressive to read and feel! !
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  • Minu Alex (10/11/2011 11:23:00 AM)

    Sometimes love is like that..It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays
    And goes with the twilight.
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  • Erhard Hans Josef Lang (2/27/2008 12:17:00 AM)

    Better times to this love of your so wondrously spun poem & better luck to love's intrinsic magic seed next time around, when Sun and Moon again shack up under a more harmonious cosmic sway. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 26, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, April 21, 2008


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