Love & Deceit Poem by Prof Dr Pradeep Kumar Mohanty

Love & Deceit

Rating: 5.0


Moon has gone black-spotted,
By Sun’s love that is deep-hearted.

But Sun has always anger carrying with,
Moon has certainly betrayed from beneath.

Thus Sun learnt the art of deceit,
It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays
And goes with the twilight.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 27 June 2012

Thus Sun learnt the art of deceit, It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays And goes with the twilight. the description similar like a melting snow.......candle wax....... the finite line sun to go away with twilights is very impressive to read and feel! !

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Minu Alex 11 October 2011

Sometimes love is like that..It comes with the dawn, stays with the rays And goes with the twilight.

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Erhard Hans Josef Lang 27 February 2008

Better times to this love of your so wondrously spun poem & better luck to love's intrinsic magic seed next time around, when Sun and Moon again shack up under a more harmonious cosmic sway.

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