Love Hurt's Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

Love Hurt's

Rating: 5.0


You had become my reason for arrising
And for retiring upon the show of the moon
For my brillantly coloured dreams of joy
And my totally bliss-filled afternoon's

All it took was a touch from your gentle hand
A caress upon my excited earthly shell
It carried me off into Elysium Lands
Where Soul-Mates loving hearts oft dwell

The stokes of your body arched in your giving
My shell complying and receiving
The sweet nectar's of your abilities
And the total ecstacy upon completing

Complementing to one another we were
A reflection of you and i in the sea
Total mirror images play back to us
The truth-you complete the whole of me

Yes you were my Season in due time
You were my consuming compliment
Together we made perfect rhyme

So where then is the reason
That you had to go?
For my heart is in shambles
And my Soul has lost its glow

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Theodora Onken 03 April 2007

One stanza could be improved, but it was written from the heart. A memory, a bitter sweet memory! Thanks Sherrie, Theo

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