I'Ll Be Here Poem by Theodora (Theo) Onken

I'Ll Be Here

Rating: 4.9

For everything you are
For everything you have been
For making my life whole
For awakening life in me again
For being that ray of hope
For giving me faith to carry on
For giving me the courage to fight
Thank you my beloved son!

Duncan Wyllie 28 August 2007

Beautiful dedication to someone who you care dearly about, , that's what I call poetry at it's finest, Take care, Love duncan X

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 August 2007

Now that's a mothers love...

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Unnikrishnan E S 28 October 2016

The poem, seemingly a simple one, expressing the love of a mother to her son. But it has the emotional make-up so deep, only a parent can understand. It is the presence of a son or daughter in our life, that would make our life wholesome, meaningful. It is his/her love for you, caring for you and a few words a day in our ears that make the world livable; life worth living. That add colors to one's life. Very Sombre and philosophical poem, that provokes thoughts on the very meaning of life, instills a lot of positive energy on the reader to ponder on and on. Great write. Loved reading, as I too have a lovely daughter who cares so much for me and her mother. Do continue to write and share.10++

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Pamela Sinicrope 10 May 2016

Simply lovely. A tribute to your son. Beautiful. Thanks!

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Theodora Onken 27 June 2016

Thank you Pamela! So appreciate your review!

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Susan Williams 02 May 2016

What a loving tribute to your son- you opened a window onto the blessing God bestows on us with the gift of children. With this piece you show us how poetry is written. We thank you.

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Theodora Onken 27 June 2016

Thank you Susan for your dear words. You and your reviews are so appreciated by me! My son was and is a true gift of God. Someday, i will share with you how truly special he is.

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Ramesh Rai 24 September 2014

Relation between son n mother is absolutely heavenly.. A heavenly write.

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Theodora Onken 27 June 2016

Thank you so much Ramesh for your divine review. Yes, my son and i are very close.

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Theodora Onken 31 August 2007

Dear Duncan and andy, Thank you both! Yes, this is written about the: ' apple of my eye, ' the greatest gift God has given to me! My son! Theo

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