Have you ever known it by a differant name, than
the name that we call love?
Could you prey upon that special one the one you
said you loved.
Do you know that special road the road that leads
that way?
Do not ever turn your back on love the other roads
to sad.
1 - James, I'm glad to read a recent poem by you! And i'm glad to report i only found two 'typos', ...found in the last three words, assuming you meant " road is" /road's, not 'roads', and " too" , not 'to'. I'll give you a pass on them....THIS TIME. cont.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
2 - No, I've never " known it by a differant name, than the name that we call love? " oops! i NOW see " differant" , not different. i missed it earlier. :) I think the last line is good advice! But, if love 'turns its back on me', i tend to walk in the opposite direction. to MyPoemList I wish you well. bri ;)