Love Is Like A River Comments

That's good. Well done. But I will also like to say that I've seen and heard of so many rivers that have dried out; not only have they stopped flowing but their waterways have been sealed with earth and they have no chance of revival.

Powerful analogy drawn between love and a river that never stops flowing. A well articulated and nicely penned piece of poetry bristling with insight. Your employment of appropriate simile to drive home your conviction is poetically remarkable. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.10/10

:) nice.. you should try writing haiku / senryu or maybe tanka.. I'd say that you have the right skill to try them..

profound emotion And humor. Liked it!

short and powerful. i actually think this is amazing, simple simile but effective xx