Love Is The Submission Poem by Chan Mongol

Love Is The Submission



LOVE IS THE SUBMISSION
Poet Chan Mongol
September 25 of 2019

Love for all, love for those enemies also
They lose minds when cruelties they do!
To love or to be loved must be innocently
So is the submission and rely on faithfully!
Smart adults can't give or take love properly
Less understanding folks know love genuinely.
Easily, you can bend a green bamboo stick
But not a ripe, hard bamboo or a dry brick!
Too smart people will suck your blood and betray
They don't vow submission at all and run away.
Even a family got rebels who want to destroy
For own interests rebels are busy for own joy.
True love means submission to someone blindly
Submission works with an image, stone or a deity.
Needing liquid juice to love or to be loved one
Without softness of the heart it can't be done!
If you want love, act like a child and stay helpless
You would be surprised to see how you get the bless!
Adult who takes advantage from another's sacrifice
Without giving the love back is committing a vice!

Wednesday, September 25, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chan Mongol 26 September 2019

Dear noble friend Leeann, thanks that you testified the matter.

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Leeann Azzopardi 25 September 2019

i know this is the truth because i have experience this many a time

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