Chan Mongol


Love And Loyalty - Poem by Chan Mongol

Her mind was occupied somewhere;
She was just a back stabber, betrayer!

Drama was played to take a free ride;
Shrewd woman revolted against guide!

Her aim was not to make a family;
But to know path to goldmine, really!

She first smelled innocence of her prey;
Thus, hunter gives the prey last day.

When love and sincerity are intense;
Traitors find doors for own presence!

Who can have a trusting, lasting family?
Ties needed with parents, kids, generally!

Couple needs time to build love mutually;
Common interests are needed, so badly!

But loyalty is important for the boss fellow;
At work, home and school what you do!

Sometimes, take the loss, change direction;
Accept what the luck and fate had done!

Family matter is crucial and need to be wise,
Love at first sight can cheat to drive to vice!

To make a family is not a part time matter;
To think over and over to marry, is better!

Check the blood group, horoscope, mind;
Activities for love and loyalty, you will find!

Love and loyalty come from the gut and is must;
No accord but family, beneficiary need the trust!

I spoke my mind in the freedom of expressions;
Expression, experience vary in various persons.

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Topic(s) of this poem: family, love, loyalty


Comments about Love And Loyalty by Chan Mongol

  • Mahtab Bangalee (3/2/2019 11:09:00 PM)

    poetic excellence-

    Love and loyalty come from the gut and is must;
    No accord but family, beneficiary need the trust! // love it
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  • Drtony Brahmin (3/1/2019 9:40:00 PM)

    When love and sincerity are intense;
    Traitors find doors for own presence!

    Who can have a trusting, lasting family?
    Ties needed with parents, kids, generally! couple need time to build love and loyalty and faithfullness. a fine poem. tony
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  • Edward Kofi Louis (3/1/2019 10:49:00 AM)

    " Couple needs time to build love mutually" !

    👫😍 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (3/1/2019 10:01:00 AM)

    One must take steps cautiously in the matter of love. Nice poem. Congrats. (Report)Reply

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  • Babatunde Aremu (3/1/2019 8:34:00 AM)

    A case of look before you leap. Very relevant to all (Report)Reply

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  • (3/1/2019 8:11:00 AM)

    Sometimes, take the loss, change direction; Nice thought, congrats
    Accept what the luck and fate had done!
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  • Savita Tyagi (3/1/2019 8:05:00 AM)

    To make a family is not a part time matter. Excellent poem. Congratulations for member poem place. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 25, 2019

Poem Edited: Friday, March 1, 2019


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