Love, Life, When Did It Begin....? ? ? ? Comments

Reads like a person beating themselves, when only to realize that they are just one unique person. GOD made one only special

This is a great Writing, I love the teaching's from love that beganand with the REALM.

Is despair all that you end with, , , , , , life has some better moments too, , at least in our imagination, , , , , , , , , beautiful lines, , if you separate the last stanza which is getting longer, then you have a very nice poem, , a 10

it took me ages to read the whole poem, but when i finished i felt itwas worth it.well penned.

I agree with Satyanarayana, You are no lil gal, you are the One and the only ONE. Everything originates from you, you are the penultimate Truth. CP

A vivid write for matured thoughts..well expressed about love life... Only the thing I noticed with the title, is it WHEN or it is intended for WEN?

You are no little girl. This poem shows ur matured thinking and expression......well done..great imagery......Hey! I read similar comment from Reetesh........so it is so true.

You are no little girl. This poem shows ur matured thinking and expression......well done..great imagery......Hey! I read similar comment from Reetesh........so it is so true.

You are no little girl. This poem shows ur matured thinking and expression......well done..great imagery......Hey! I read similar comment from Reetesh........so it is so true.

i liked every word of it. and mind u..ur not lil gal ur big girl now with such thoughts and superb craft. i have to learn a lot from u i feel.

wow my SGL how sweet you have written dear...... really a great work of imagination and full of feelings.and described very well dear.......really a lovely poet you are

The sharp edge of love.