Love Like A Leaf (Tanka) Poem by Jesus Diaz Llorico

Love Like A Leaf (Tanka)

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"Our love's like a leaf
being soaked by the soft rain
until one forgets
that from steady showering
no one can see it's weeping."

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 28 June 2018

Our love's like a leaf being soaked by the soft rain until one forgets that from steady showering no one can see it's weeping. - - - - - Such a beautiful Tanka! ! !

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Jesus Llorico 29 June 2018

Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak, really appreciate it.

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Chinedu Dike 27 June 2018

Well conceived and nicely encapsulated with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Jesus.

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Jesus Llorico 28 June 2018

Thank you for a very nice comment Mr Chinedu Dike really appreciate it.

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