"Our love's like a leaf
being soaked by the soft rain
until one forgets
that from steady showering
no one can see it's weeping."
Well conceived and nicely encapsulated with insight. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Jesus.
Thank you for a very nice comment Mr Chinedu Dike really appreciate it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Our love's like a leaf being soaked by the soft rain until one forgets that from steady showering no one can see it's weeping. - - - - - Such a beautiful Tanka! ! !
Thank you Ms Bharati Nayak, really appreciate it.