Love Lost Poem by thobile provin mabena

Love Lost

Rating: 3.8


I cry I lied
I try im tired

Im turned to a beast
Who once was the best nest
I loved so much
I cared for such
Now im scarred of that touch

I made and pave my way to your heart
With a spell yes it was too bright
I spent my time holding you upright
But yay I messed my night
You took my light

Im hurt I feel a pain of a love lost
The scars you gave my post
I wish you weren't my host


You didnt love me
Thats why you left
It was not heartfelt
That I can bet

You turned my one heart
Into scarful mince meat

Divided by confusion
Tempted by emulsion
This aint an organisation
Where you can go to and fro without interruption
Its my love my heart my life with no hesitation
Why hurt me

I loved you
I needed you
I wanted you
I longed for you
I guess it wasnt in you

Love Lost
Thursday, July 16, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 16 July 2015

A well written but sad poem, Thobile Thanks for sharing Peace

0 0 Reply
Chinedu Dike 20 July 2015

Love is a spiritual experience that affects all and sundry profoundly. It is however, whimsical and temperamental, coming unannounced and may leave without warning. A well articulated piece of poetry, nicely penned from inner recesses of the heart with beautiful rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

1 0 Reply
Terrance Mawanga 18 July 2015

This a great poem. It conveys deep emotions. Keep up the good work.

1 0 Reply
Mo Masedi 17 July 2015

It is a good poem, I loved it, how you rhyme your words.

1 1 Reply
Captain Herbert Poetry 17 July 2015

Full of passion within the lines. Lovely poem

1 0 Reply
Allotey Abossey 17 July 2015

I love your style... It's a beautiful poem as love but love has to be free. Good work friend. God bless you

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success