Love Me Forever Poem by Kayleigh ....

Love Me Forever

Rating: 4.5


I've lost the battle inside
And its taking me over
This feeling I have
And oh how I long to tell you
Tell you how its tearing me apart
How it hurts
But instead I'll just rest
My head on this tear drenched pillow
And let the last tears fall
Before drifting away
To a place where we can be together
And you'll hold me and tell me
You'll love me forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Waiting for someone who's not there for you. It's the worst feeling ever. I know what you're feeling in this poem. Such a great expression of your emotions.

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Apothecary Montague 01 November 2009

amazing poem, feeling is well expressed and written.

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Trenton Watson 27 October 2009

this confuses me a bit. I dont get it first ur saying u lost love? or... ahh i dont know but u definatly know what u mean 10+

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