Love of captain and crew.
Now the captain of a battered sail boat, with no sails adrift the open seas.
Afloat rocky waters, under cloudy skies, no stares nor compass to guide me.
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Welcome to Poem Hunter, James! A good start, though you have a few grammar and spelling errors. Practice makes perfect!
Well conceived and nicely embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation written with clarity of thought and mind. Thanks for sharing James.
A fine start with a nice poem, James Putnam. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks