Love Poem Poem by Barry Middleton

Love Poem

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Dawn's music,
secrets,
and the damp air
of early morning,
are things progressively
more melancholy.
Until like the music,
like the heavy air,
like the secrets
and warm feelings,
we are part of the air,
part of the music,
making secrets
in the closeness
of sunrise.

Saturday, August 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,passion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
another from college days
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 06 August 2016

Yes, Love unites and opens all of Nature's beauty, all of Life's beauty in the palpitating, sharing hearts of two. Wonderful poem With the sweet nectar of the new morning breeze.

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Barry Middleton 06 August 2016

I'm glad you liked it. I never know about these poems that I wrote so long ago. Thank you for the comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 06 August 2016

Closeness! ! Nice work.

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Barry Middleton 06 August 2016

Thanks Edward. Glad you liked the poem.

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