Love is strange,
And so unsettled,
As it flutters round your heart,
Like a free bird, once it's captured,
Sees its Liberty depart.
Love can also be a slavery,
If one sided from the start,
Painful thorns can damage gravely,
What was once a painless heart.
Love a feeling, never faintly,
That so many want to know,
It's the emotion that enhances,
Deepest passion, mystery flow.
Your poem 'Love's Secrets' is simply superb! The depth that some of the lines carry may be unfathomable, unless read with a discerning eye. Like: 'Like a free bird, once it's captured, Sees its Liberty depart.' - When love is captured, its liberty departs, what a deep thought! 'Love can also be a slavery, If one sided from the start, Painful thorns can damage gravely, What was once a painless heart.' - Very absorbing thoughts! 'It's the emotion that enhances, Deepest passion, mystery flow.' - Every lover knows this so well! Wonderful reading, thanks! 10/10.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem expresses the need for L-O-V-E to fulfill our human nature. We are meant to be lovers! The equation is simplicity itself: Me + You = Happiness (or at least - Fulfillment) . Love's Secrets, in that sense, are right out in the open. But I like your additional comments: first, identifying those loves which warp its nature, LOVE as slavery, LOVE as suffering. These things happen, and you are acknowledging them. And the last line indicates LOVE demands a degree of privacy because oF DEEPEST EMOTION, MYSTERY FLOW.