Mission Impossible? Poem by Sandra Feldman

Mission Impossible?

Rating: 4.9


Around the Circle
Of Life's Fire,
Poets gather
In good faith,
In worded
Festive attire,
Bringing poems,
As offerings
To give literary
Council, with sincere
Sentimental, desire,
Wanting to beautify
And respect Life
Spread Love,
Give positive language
To perceptive hearts
And minds,
Thus hoping
To act harmoniously
And change, the World,
While in dark corners
Lurks, Evil
That keeps plotting,
With numerous armies
Of murderous Devils,
On how to control
And take over,
Mankind,
By chaining
And shattering,
Wills and Minds.

Friday, November 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: good,evil
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 09 December 2019

A well composed poem of the day. Congrats, dear Ma’am Sandra on your featured piece.....❤️❤️❤️🙏👌😊

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Sandra Feldman 09 December 2019

Wonderful words, thank you so much, dear Bernard!

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 December 2019

With numerous armies Of murderous Devils, On how to control And take over, Mankind, By chaining And shattering, Wills and Minds. soo true.. congrats dear Sandra. tony

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Sandra Feldman 09 December 2019

My pleasure! Thank you so much for your lovely words.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2019

An insightful piece of work with powerful expression! Many congratulations for this brilliant poem being selected as Poem of the Day!

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Tyler Cobb 07 August 2024

These words are described perfectly! Very well said!

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Tom Allport 15 June 2024

A well penned right that shines a light on humanity's plight.

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PREMKUMAR C N 29 November 2023

While in dark corners Lurks, Evil That keeps plotting, With numerous armies Of murderous Devils, On how to control And take over, Mankind, By chaining And shattering, Wills and Minds, Marvelous expression of truth. Excellent poem with short lines.

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Terry Craddock 25 September 2020

loved the welcome in the first three lines, loved the harmony truth, even the sad truth in the poem's ending, but to emphasize the positive, let us rejoice in 'To give literary Council, with sincere Sentimental, desire, Wanting to beautify And respect Life Spread Love, ' wonderful, wonderful lines

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Sandra Feldman 10 December 2019

Thank you all, wonderful poets for giving me so much attention, and for the unforgettable words for my simple poem. So enjoyable, sweet and rewarding! Bless you All. But I did not enjoy competing with all these ads especially, the French Perfume one that was good and LOUD! I don't even know how all of you were able to read the poem at all! I thank you for your Courage! ! ! I hope this situation will not continue. It was highly disagreeable and exhausting! ! ! .

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